I spent the weekend to work on a new version of the datatasks website. Mostly on the copy.
Christian Lubasch gave me feedback and it was: “Only when I reached the bottom and watched the video I had an idea what datatasks is about” – Autsch
But he was right. The initial copy was only describing the service from a very very high level.
To get an idea how to improve it I checked my bookmarked copy writing resources. Mainly Neville Medhora (https://lnkd.in/dCNMsfe)
I love his approach to copy. And I guess that is one of the secrets of copy. Everyone has their style and some work for you and other not. Neville’s work for me 100%.
Based on some use cases I started to rewrite.
Did some design tweaks as well.
And voila – new website version: https://datatasks.dev
Any feedback? – Would love to hear it.